Murder at pine suits (A Short Story )
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BREAKING NEWS : The body of a young lady was found lieing dead at room 17 in pine suits 6 : 30, Saturday morning, her body was slaughtered and her hair was shaved and taking away, her corpse was found at the closet covered by blood. The young lady murdered is a prolific writer of mystery books and she was murdered the same way the main character in the last novel she wrote before her death, was murdered.
The whole town of Guinness was thrown into chaos after the mysterious death of a prolific writer. She was butchered just the same way the main character in the last novel she wrote was butchered and her hair was shaved and taken away by the killer just like the same way the main character in the last novel she wrote before she died. Sussanah, her teenage cousin wouldn't rest until the killer is exposed.
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