When the lights go out (Read Description!!!)
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Complete Thu, Apr 8, 20212h 9m
So I'm planning to rewrite this story as I am unhappy with the way it turned out. The ending was rushed, it barely fits the description of a murder mystery, and it's been poorly written with little to no explanation on some details. I will rewrite it once it has been planned out. To those who have read it, thank you for the support, it has really encouraged me to continue writing. I am only young, but the kind words you have said has given me the motivation to continue what I love doing. I will get the new story out as soon as I can. I promise
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