Please, Wait What?!
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Ongoing13m
Last published Mon, Jan 26, 2015
This is the new story for Please...Wait what i re-wrote it and stuff so yea.
Nancy and Carter are sisters. They moved to a different country with their mother and they are starting a new school.
One day on the way home from a horrible day at school...they get kidnapped. What happens when they find out who did it? and mainly why they did it.
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