Our luck lines
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"Here something is so connective with all of them. It feels like I know them, I have seen them and I have been with them but this time it's something different and if I know who I am and if I am not mistaking it then I don't wanna repeat that horrible past again. It's better that we all should not gather at one place and cross our paths again. But what about my heart which is not following any instructions of my mind and so it was at that time. I can't let those hidden desires and feelings arise in me. I so wanna run back to...... run back to him. But it's better to run away from them."
here guys, I am presenting our Mahabharata in a new era and new way. All of them take birth again and what if their luck lines again connected them with each other. What will happen? But here, I will be presenting the Mahabharata in perspective of our most favorite lady of Mahabharata.Guess who? So pls this is gonna interesting. It will be like Mahabharata happening in new era with each and every lesson with new experiences.
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