Submerged
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Last published Sat, Mar 6, 2021
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I opened my eyes. It was almost as if I never opened them at all. Nothing around me was visible. Everything is... dark. my whole body is spread out... am I floating? My body feels weightless but somehow I feel... expanded. Like I'm full. Suddenly... my body hits something. Forceful... but graceful at the same time. Finally, I understand. I was sinking. Am I at the bottom of the ocean?
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