[Doctor who fanfic]

[-Hey. This is my first doctor who fan fic story. doctor who belongs to the bbc. - Wasn't sure how to set it out so i did in a sort of script type. I love doctor who, i just wish they would bring some characters back such as jack :). I also love Torchwood, so you may see me write torchwood fanfic in the future. Also this is sort of a crossover episode. Not sure what i should call it, any ideas? Also this is only the first part. hope you like it :)-] Info- The Doctor and Clara land on earth where an old friend of the doctor's is about as well as an old enemy.