RESEÑA DE CRITICAS INDEPENDIENTE ( EDITORIAL )
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Hola.
Mi Nombre es Natasha mis amigos me dicen Nati de cariño ... Soy crítica literaria de Libros independiente ...
Amedida del tiempo no hemos permitido llenar libro electrónicos o digitales en Platafomas web .
Está sección está dedicada a revisar tu obra literaria y sugerir cambios o correcciones para que tú libro llegué a una editorial física ..
Este Espacio es considerado Blog personal...
Y las reseñas se irán subiendo a media que se les de indicaciones para corregir .
En este libro que espero igual que sea de tu agrado
El objetivo aquí no es crear, ambientes de discusión peor aún menospreciar tu trabajo ... Me he echo disponible para ayudarte al 1000 x 1000 , quiero poderte a yudar a mejorar tu obra .
ejemplo
1 tr. Formarse y relacionar ideas en la mente.
♦ Se construye con las preps. en y sobre: pensaba sobre la forma de hacerlo.
2 Examinar algo en la mente antes de tomar una decisión o darle una solución: tengo que pensarme si acepto o no.
3 Concebir un plan, procedimiento o medio para algo:pensaba en la forma de decírselo.
4 Tener intención de lo que se expresa:
hoy no pienso salir.
5 Tener alguien una opinión sobre algo o manifestarla:
yo pienso que no tienes razón.
ni pensarlo loc. De ninguna manera, rotundamente no, en forma alguna.
6 pensar mal o bien loc. Interpretar negativa o positivamente las acciones o las palabras de una persona, desconfiando de ellas o no:
no pienses mal, que no voy a engañarte.
sin pensar loc. adv.
De improviso o inesperadamente:
lo hizo sin pensar.
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