Family by accident

Hello guys.

Iam new into writing so please I accept only constructive feedback.

Plot of the story:
Marina is a 20 years old girl who has grown up in orphanages and in foster families.She has never experienced the meaning of family and as a young adult,she tries to find a way to create her personal path.Her need for money is taken advantage by an illegal network of infant tracking,which sells babys or surrogate mothers to people who cannot have children legally.James is a 27th years old man who lives with his drug addict girlfriend,Diana who after miltuple miscarriages,craves to have a baby with James in order for her to feel redeemed from her past mistakes. These people are brought together initially as a result of need but the after of many unpredicted events,they tend to become a family ...by accident

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