Donny Coil: Helix
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(Going to be rewritten after My Electric Friend is finished, although I think the writing is okay, there some plot holes that need fixing, like the event with Melissa for example. The timeline I've created fixed that so I should have no problem writing it)
Donny, a shy mutant boy who can manipulate quantum physics, has nothing but depression and a negative past. He gets partnered up with a popular, and attractive conceited girl named Leina. During their missions and their time together at the military base, they don't exactly get along with each other because of Leina's lack of compassion towards him.
When Donny meets his main enemy, Alleyne, he finds she is a very caring person with feelings just like him. He is able to connect more with her than Leina.
Donny must help solve all of the conflicting political opinions between the four organizations that could resolve in the world's destruction: The Democratic Oligarchy Systems, The Cybran Conservation, The Protectorate of Worlds, and The Cosmic Imperium. Considering his mental problems, and all the situations he is put through, does he even have a chance with such limited time?
A dystopian Science Fiction/Teen Fiction story about friendship, love, compassion, anger, and action! A story where I express myself.
Thanks for checking this out! ~Devin~
Teen Fiction. Science Fiction. Action. Romance.
Warning: PG-13 for mild language, and violence.
With anime pictures (That aren't mine) that inspired the characteristics inside the media.
Highest Ranking: #77 in Science Fiction!
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