Too Many Surprises
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Last published Sun, Aug 23, 2020
Remeber the "Too Many Pinkies" incident?
Well, it's like that but with Surprise the Wonderbolt.
Surprise is a Wonderbolt. She was just walking and found a lake. Little did she know that was the Mirror Lake. Exactly like the one from "Too Many Pinkies".
The Wonderbolts don't know how to figure out who is the real Surprise, or even how to fix this! They have to figure it all on their own.
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