Mafia boss' wife

The story is available in fictionpress too.
This is my first FF ' Mafia boss' wife' This story revolves around and young Mafia named jimin and y/n .

I want to brush up on my character descriptions. I often feel that they don't come as naturally to me as dialogue, body language or environmental descriptions, and dredging up that really incisive detail that sticks in the reader's head is something I'd like to strive for more regularly.

Jimin - Mafia

Y/n - officer

PS: there are other bts members in this FF

What are some of the most memorable character descriptions you've seen? In fanfic or in literature, genre fiction, whatever. I hope you guys like my FF