Throw That Away, Please!

Throw That Away, Please!

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Two sisters with completely different lives learn to live independently as the world struggles to tear them down. It's a game of deceit and manipulation. Who is hiding the truth and who has the most influence has the chance to win. But there's always a loophole. Will love win the day again? Or are we destined to fail not knowing who we are? • Trigger warning: panic attacks ____________________ Help me get to 1K reads please ❤️ Started: 11th July 2020 Status: Ongoing Writer's block since 2021 I'd appreciate it if you could have a read and lmk on how to improve this or go about the story line. Looking for inspiration to do this story justice. All criticism is welcome :) #1 in Hoarding as of 22/5/21 #25 in Mental health awareness 20/6/21 #52 in Pure 2/6/21 #144 in pure 8/6/21
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VERSION 1 "Do you do this with every girl you think is pretty or am I special?" "You're very special. You're my sapphire. You're my introspection and meditation" He says as he kisses my hand "I love you, Diamond." I chuckle "I love you too." Pecks my lips. "but isn't this selfish?" He squeezes my hand. "Sometimes you have to be selfish for your happiness." 40k+ words 𝐃𝐈𝐀𝐌𝐎𝐍𝐃 𝐂𝐀𝐌𝐄𝐑𝐎𝐍 is a travel blogger and influencer and single mother.She goes to a night club and waits for her brother to arrive. While waiting she meets 𝐌𝐀𝐑𝐂𝐈𝐀𝐍𝐎 𝐂𝐀𝐑𝐔𝐒𝐎. Her brother Shawn's best friend. He immediately catches her eye. She does the same to him. He's charming but stern at the same time. He's what she wants and she is what he wants. But his job interferes with their relationship and so does his best friend and her ex. 𝐂𝐎𝐍𝐓𝐀𝐈𝐍𝐒 𝐀𝐂𝐂𝐈𝐃𝐄𝐍𝐓𝐀𝐋 𝐏𝐑𝐄𝐆𝐍𝐀𝐍𝐂𝐘 Very fast paced. VERSION 2 "What are you both doing here?" I ask them. "Did you really think we wouldn't find out? I mean honestly Diamond, do you think we're stupid?" I finally realize what this is, a confrontation. "I-I'm so-" "Sorry? save your words, Love. We aren't here for for that, we're sure you could apologize in other ways..right,Marciano?" Cyrus says and Marci nods. "What can I do?" "Lay down and let us handle the rest." ---------------------------------------------- ACCIDENTAL PREGNANCY, WHY CHOOSE? FAST PACED.

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