The Fateful Evening Part l
Ltelidevara
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Ltelidevara
Ongoing, First published Jul 13, 2020
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Disclaimer. This story is based on Vyasa Bharat. Yes the scenes and lines spoken were created by me and I did it with conviction . I took care not to overdo the creativity part but I definitely added my own imagination in taking the story forward.

This was the story of Arjuna and Draupadi as per the Mahabharata story.
It was the journey of third Pandav and the most beautiful princess of the Era,Krishnaa Yajnaseni ,also called Panchali .

I deliberately followed the main story without deviating from the actual narration of Veda Vyasa. Yes I took creative liberty in portraying the emotions,love and the sentiments but I stick to the charecter sketch as given in the Epic.

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I want to alert those who tried or trying to reproduce my story as their own ...The Fateful Evening with four parts is my creation. Lots of my readers know the fact..So better not to resort to such things..
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Pandava Nandini

22 parts Ongoing

Have you ever thought of a reality where the Pandavas and their wife Draupadi shared a daughter? Where she was their life and soul? She was Yudishithir's mind. She was Bheem's strength. She was Arjun's ideals. She was Nakul's speed. She was Sahadev's knowledge. She was Draupadi's fierceness. She was their Aadi. Although we love and cherish the Mahabharat as it is, we can't help but think, what if there was someone else, someone who would change fate?

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