Your Final Breath (An Original Story)
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Last published Mon, Jul 13, 2020
In the year 2034 located in Milwaukee, Wisconsin is an orphanage. Everything seems alright on the outside, but on the inside there's something more sinister going on. When a child turns 16, if they are still living in the orphanage, they are taken away to a room on the far side of the building. Once there, they are murdered to make room for new orphans. The children don't know about this until they are taken away. Jane Rose McCartner and Alyssa Louise Harper would soon be facing this tradition. But what happens when they accidentally stumble upon one of the children being killed? Will they run? Will they be able to escape from this terrible fate?
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