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You Crept Into My Heart [Rewrite]
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Ongoing, First published Jul 14, 2020
We all have a constructed image of the guy who we envision to marry. Tall. Handsome. Smart. Muscular. Thin.

But what if that perfect guy doesn't exist or if they do,they live thousands of miles away? 

What happens if a guy takes an interest in you and comes to ask for your hand in marriage but you have no clue who he is?

What if you father agrees to the proposal without asking for your permission? 

What would you do? 

This is exactly what happens to Afia Patel, a 21 year old university student who is waiting patiently for her prince charming to arrive and sweep her off her feet.

She always dreamt of the way she will meet her one and only. She'll just know he's the one! She'll have that gut feeling. But what if she doesn't get that gut feeling and it's left up to her to decide.

Ubaidullah Khan, a fun loving person who always dreamed of having a wife who was loyal and obeyed him, who was beautiful but did not get any help from makeup to make her pretty , who was outspoken but modest. What happens when he finds that in Afia. The girl who he admired from afar. The girl who doesn't know that he exists. The girl who captured his heart with just one glance. The girl who crept into his heart without knowing. 

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