MeltDown The Original Draft
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Ongoing6h 6m
Last published Sat, Jul 18, 2020
THIS STORY WILL NOT BE UPDATED!
Have you ever wondered how the original draft of my story looked like?
Now is your opportunity. This book has been discontinued but I would love for you the reader to look and see how much has changed from the original.
If you are new here please I urge you to read the new version of Meltdown. Its better in terms of grammar...Well basically in every aspect but I hope you enjoy this still! <3
Thank you for 6 years of Melt Down!
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