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MeltDown The Original Draft

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Parts 35
Time 6h 6m

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THIS STORY WILL NOT BE UPDATED!

Have you ever wondered how the original draft of my story looked like?
Now is your opportunity. This book has been discontinued but I would love for you the reader to look and see how much has changed from the original.
If you are new here please I urge you to read the new version of Meltdown. Its better in terms of grammar...Well basically in every aspect but I hope you enjoy this still! &lt;3

Thank you for 6  years of Melt Down!All Rights Reserved

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His Prize

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