On Point
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Last published Fri, Sep 4, 2020
19 year-old Brooklyn Jones had always achieved everything she's gone for. Through the hardest of competitions and the simplest of practices, Brook had worked harder than anyone to be the best that she could be. With an easy-going life, Brook had always found it easy to pursue the thing she loved most: skating.
However, when a tragic accident struck the Jones' family, everything changed. Brook found herself adjusting to the new lifestyle and the new personalities around her.
As her once structured life became messier and messier, Brook tried to find a way to get it under control. With her mom getting worse by the day and her brother starting his own life, Brook was blindly falling into a hole of hopelessness.
One day, when an email sneaks its way into Brook's inbox, it leaves her weighing her options and forces her to make the second hardest decision in her life. In the end, she knew she had to find a way to get out of the hole she was sinking in and this was it.
She had to take that next step.
Leaving behind untouched problems, Brook sets off for the states.
Follow Brooklyn as she navigates this scary but exciting new chapter in her life. Through blisters, bruises, and heartbreak, seeds are planted and weeds are cut down.
Did she leave for the right reasons? And at what cost? Twists, turns, and falls have been second nature on the ice, but can she handle it in life?
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