Hold Me In The Rain

I'm changing some things around a bit, like the genders and names of some characters, and some other things as well. Bear with me!

a re-write of a story I wrote about a year ago.

Original Description:
Aiko and Hikaru are best friends. They have been ever since they were assigned the same dorm at their school. To Hikaru, Aiko is his best, loyal friend. To Aiko, Hikaru is her secret crush. She's liked him since the day they met, and Hikaru is utterly clueless. What will happen? Will Aiko confess? Read to find out.

New description: Chiaki and Hikaru; in Japan, these two young women are roommates and very close friends. Hikaru is a bumbling, clueless halfwit, and Chiaki is hopelessly in love with her. Cliche, I know. But it's called cliche for a reason. It's a common problem. Along with her crush on hikaru, Chiaki struggles through life with a pessimistic outlook. Can Hikaru change this?