Struggle Against Sin

Synopsis: After losing eight wives, Dean's life has seemed to only get worse and worse. While remembering one of his wives, a grocery delivery girl comes by, only for her to be much more than she seems. Light NSFW warning. Nothing too bad, and it's over before too long. Also, i'm an idiot, by /n mean narration. I didn't know how else to describe that he's narrating.

To be honest, I haven't had the motivation to write anything in a while, and this was a refreshing way to try and get back into it. I wanted to structure this into the style of a webseries of webcomic, because I can't imagine this working as anything else. While I wanna try and continue it, I won't promise anything. I've never written a script, so feel free to tell me what I can improve on. I did this in about 2 days, over a series of 4 hour bouts of pure...idk, genius isn't the word, but you get me. I hope you enjoy!