Draft 5 - The Idiots Guide to Space Travel *completed* - Dumpsite_for_all

Draft 5 - The Idiots Guide to Space Travel *completed*

Reads 59
Votes 13
Parts 28
Time 35m

Reads 59
Votes 13
Parts 28
Time 35m

Apparently i really fucked something up in this one because the days are off and things seem to be in the wrong order (no wonder I didn't get a great mark) anyway the stories still okay 

so this is essentially the same as draft 4 but actually done, I recommend reading all of it even if you did read draft four just because I'm not sure how much of it I changed. also, the cover looks weird because I had to cut off half of it to remove my name since I did do this as a school assignment. this is also the final version of said assignment. 

anyway I'm actually really proud of how this story turned out(aside from the date issues), any writing advice is highly appreciatedAll Rights Reserved

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