Flaw
  • Reads 121
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  • Parts 27
  • Time 4h 40m
  • Reads 121
  • Votes 8
  • Parts 27
  • Time 4h 40m
Complete, First published Jul 28, 2020
Mature
The Dommasc Society saw the corruption and potential war that new-age movements such as feminism, LGBTQ, and racial equality could bring to their island, and therefore decided to eradicate it. They cut themselves off from the influence of the world, and they would rule their society as they wanted. They never expected their perfectly set out plan to go wrong, but it did and so she was born.

Flaw was supposed to be his, but she broke free and started to hunt the hunters. This was never supposed to happen, but she knew that flaws did not last forever, and neither would she.

Blake knows her way around the island, so when a mysterious explosion went off, why did she end up being kidnapped, and better yet, why did she feel the need to stay with her kidnapper?

Ensley doesn't have long to live, and she knows it. Her heart is getting weaker, but if anybody found out, she would be exiled. When her brother's murderer injects her with a toxin, she feels herself getting better, and falling in love with the one who stole her world from her.

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TRIBULATIONS

63 parts Ongoing Mature

Arthur Bloomlock, son of Medalia Bloomlock and Walter Bloomlock, embarks on a journey full of tribulations after the incident that happened during an Event to celebrate something the Government has been working on for a very long time. What really seemed like an Utopia, turned into something far more indescribable. Bennett Thunderstorm just so happened to be there on the night of the event. Little did he know, he would embark on a journey with Arthur. The goal is to survive. But would that really be enough? The two want answers and to be safe. But answers and, most importantly, safety aren't to be found in the Upside City, Also known as Dreamaspira. Arthur and Bennett must both travel somewhere else, a place many speak badly of. The Undercity, The complete opposite of the Upside City, was Truly a Dystopia, or so it looked. There, Arthur and Bennett meet the Rulers of Mispair. Unexpected events happen. Will Bennett succumb to the mysterious woman who is part of the Rulers of Mispair? Will the head Ruler of Mispair open up to Arthur? Aside from that, will the two best friends be destroyed by the Government? Arthur Bloomlock and Bennet Thunderstorm have a lot to learn, a lot to discover, much mourning to do, a lot to lose, and particular people to love. Many decisions would shape their future, but would they choose the right ones? Disclaimer: The description was made on the 8th of December, 2023. All types of Assault, swearing, corruption, intense topics (famine, poverty, etc.), mature scenes.