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Last published Sun, Aug 16, 2020
Como dije en la descripción yo soy el antiguo @Jere_640 pero se me murió la cuenta, así que voy a seguir la historia que tenia allí, solo que sin copiarla por obvia razones, si no que voy a empezar de cero haciendo otras criticas. Bai
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