The broken god
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Last published Thu, Nov 10, 2022
Its a fantasy filled with some action with a thrilling and creative story the story is filled with adventure but at its core is a power fantasy and a tale of a broken man who is so tortured that he is now numb to pain both emotional and physical he still feels is he is just to quote his own words "when u see a the world burn a hundred million times u kinda get used to it , u still feel it when it burns u with all the pain staying the same but screeming in pain isnt gonna make it any better and since uv seen worse u dont really get the luxury of ignorance u just wait for it knowing full well its gonna hurt like hell "
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