The broken god
- Reads 33
- Votes 1
- Parts 1
MatureOngoing<5 mins
Last published Thu, Nov 10, 2022
Its a fantasy filled with some action with a thrilling and creative story the story is filled with adventure but at its core is a power fantasy and a tale of a broken man who is so tortured that he is now numb to pain both emotional and physical he still feels is he is just to quote his own words "when u see a the world burn a hundred million times u kinda get used to it , u still feel it when it burns u with all the pain staying the same but screeming in pain isnt gonna make it any better and since uv seen worse u dont really get the luxury of ignorance u just wait for it knowing full well its gonna hurt like hell "
All Rights Reserved
Join the largest storytelling communityGet personalized story recommendations, save your favourites to your library, and comment and vote to grow your community.
You may also like
Fernweh {Discontinued}
That feeling of just wanting to drop everything and leave it all behind. Beware of it. You might lose what can't be returned. You might want your reality back. You might regret the consequences to come. But don't be afraid. Change brings good and bad. It will open doors and seal others. What you do with that opportunity is your choice and only yours. So, beware that longing or if you can't, embrace what is to come. For what is to come is everything you wanted and everything you feared.Complete
Luminaria
Morinathia Rosales lived for the thrill of luxury - designer labels, champagne toasts, and flawless skin. To her, happiness always came with a price... until the price turned out to be her life. Waking up in a world unknown, she finds herself in the body of a royal - not on a throne, but in chains. From glam to dungeon, from clinking champagne glasses to the screech of iron rails that caged her in. Her second life doesn't crown her a queen... it chains her as a prisoner.
The Crimson Requiem: Liturgy of the Damned
The world does not know pain. Not yet. The stars hang too peacefully in the sky, the air is too clean, and the people-they breathe too easily. They laugh, they love, they dream. They do not know what true suffering is. Max Morbarius will teach them. He was once a man. Once fragile, once weak, once breakable. But pain reshaped him. They tore him apart. They drowned him in agony. They thought death would claim him. They were wrong. Something ancient whispered to him from the abyss. Something hungry. Something that found his agony... beautiful. It did not offer salvation. It did not grant peace. It tore his soul from his corpse and stitched it into something monstrous. Now, he does not kill for justice. He does not kill for revenge. He kills because it makes the world scream. He moves like a shadow through the night, his presence an infection, a creeping plague of fear. He does not just slaughter his enemies-he peels them apart, nerve by nerve, bone by bone. He drinks their suffering, paints the walls with their entrails, carves their sins into their skulls. Their agony is his masterpiece. Their blood is his baptism. But he is not the worst thing that crawls from the dark. There are others. Things lurking beyond human understanding. Eldritch horrors with endless mouths, gods that demand rivers of suffering, nightmares that fester and grow in the rot of his carnage. And they whisper to him. They watch him carve, rip, and mutilate. They want more. They are waiting for him to unleash his true form, to let go of what little remains of his soul, to become the thing they always knew he could be. The Red King of Ruin. The Harbinger of the Fleshstorm. The Father of Agony. And when he finally lets the madness consume him... The world will not be reduced to ashes. It will drown in an ocean of screaming, writhing, bleeding flesh. Because death is not the end. It is only the beginning.Complete
The Davis Clan
This a action and adventure story based on a criminal organization named as 'UWO'. The story follows a teacher who's really brilliant but still expelled from colleges and school. He's frustrated of his life. One day he's caught for a criminal act for no reason. He's sent to jail and meets a person who changes his total lifestyle. The person's the main protagonist and antagonist. Who's in a criminal organization. Which is the most devasting thing ever made. But something more devasting happens...Complete
Just A Little Loko
I worked for longer than anyone could imagine... Just for it to come to this... No matter what I do... Nothing is ever good enough. Maybe this is my place in life. Maybe this is just my destiny: Failure. - Gazing into the mind of an antagonist who's drive for success led him down the wrong rabbit hole. A man living in the shadows of a broken world. Though maybe the world wasn't broken. Maybe it was just him all along. Maybe the broken world broke him too, and if everything's broken, it's perfectly fine, right? Mostly following the plot of Spirit Tracks, through Byrne's eyes, and his desperate attempt to gain power for a reason misinterpreted, though probably understandable. I've put my own original turns on this every now and then, as one would probably expect, but it's not romance, none of that hopeless crap. But rather, a thin line of grief and denial. Exchanging one life for another. Of course however, in the end... Is it really Byrne's mind? Or another? It's debatable, depending on how technical you'd want to get... It follows memories, feelings-even conflicting ones. I don't write to impress people, so don't get your hopes up. I didn't start proof reading until after Chapter Four, so prepare yourself. The story, being carried in first person, I tried to put emphasis on one's head. I don't think there's too much drama, I wanted things to at least make some kind of sense... But, alas, everything is just a perspective, for each of us. I don't think I'm right, but I don't think I'm wrong. We don't really know what happened, so I suppose that's the beauty of freedom. We can theorize whatever we want. - If you enjoy my story, don't be afraid to drop a vote. Touch that star, it's free and doesn't cost you anything. (I've rewritten the entire story multiple times over the course of several years... I swear... I think this is the one. This is it. I can feel it in my ancient soul and withering mind. It may not be perfect, but it makes due.)Complete
Chain of Roses
This peaceful and perfect world is amazing to everyone. Who could hate it? A world where everyone is happy and there's no war or fighting... All except for a boy named June Shiba. The world isn't peaceful and happy for him. He doesn't have any memories of his past or why he's on the streets. knowing nothing but how to survive. One day he sees something unbelievable to human eyes, a vampire. The military was chasing him but he got away but not before going after June. June wakes up the next morning and sees no trace of what happened. He sees the military soldier that was chasing this so-called "vampire.", but he knows nothing about it. Later that day someone found him. A person named Aki. She takes him in and raises him. June was actually happy for once.. until the day predicted by fate.
MR VIVO
A heart once full of love now burns with the searing pain of loss. He is a man whose family was cruelly taken from him, leaving behind nothing but echoes of their laughter and the ghostly remnants of a life that once was. The fire inside him is unquenchable, a relentless force driven by a single purpose-revenge. **Prepare yourself for an intense journey,** where every page draws you deeper into a world of unrelenting action and gut-wrenching sorrow. The vivid descriptions will make you feel the anguish of a man who once struck fear into the hearts of criminals, now brought to his knees by the loss of his loved ones. The sequences within this book are not just scenes; they are experiences-thrilling, heart-pounding moments that could only be imagined or seen on the silver screen. As you turn each page, you will be pulled into a tale where vengeance is more than a mission; it's the only thing that keeps him alive. This is a story of a man against the world, where the lines between right and wrong blur, and the only thing that remains clear is his unyielding drive to avenge his family. His pain will become your pain, his anger your anger, and his journey will haunt you long after the last page is turned. This text can be used as the blurb or a promotional piece for your novel.Complete
Across Two Worlds: The story of how I became a Hero
Have you ever wondered if you were meant to be something greater than what you ended up becoming but, life had other plans for you? Could it be something as simple as fate forcing us down whatever predetermined path was set upon our birth? No one can really say for sure what drives our lives in the direction they end up going. Sometimes we wake ourselves up to realize this isn't who I wanted to be and drown ourselves in delusions, convinced its unchangeable, or they are not willing to put the effort in to try to change their life because it may be to hard or painful. Others don't care content with the life they have and just float through life trying to not get caught up in everything. There are also those that blame fate or a higher existence then them for their problems and mistakes never truly taking accountability. This is the stories of several young adults, who by some interesting and what could be seen as cruel or traumatic events come together to fight fate and grow into the people they wish to become. Each has a past that was unfair, cruel, demeaning, or tragic. The defining trait they all share though, they may not realize it themselves is despite it all, they haven't given in. They found through meeting eachother the strength to fight on despite being subjected to some of the worst things that can happen to people. When a young man from our world dies doing something his ideal self would have done, he reflects on his life moments before leaving this world. Finding it Ironic that dying was the catalyst to him realizing he had lived his life all wrong. Surprisingly though he found himself in a place that was unrecognizable. He could never have imagined that this was only the start of what he now sees as a second chance. A chance to keep a promise he made to someone dear, and a new promise to himself that he would become what that person needed most back then, A Hero.
That feeling of just wanting to drop everything and leave it all behind. Beware of it. You might lose what can't be returned. You might want your reality back. You might regret the consequences to come. But don't be afraid. Change brings good and bad. It will open doors and seal others. What you do with that opportunity is your choice and only yours. So, beware that longing or if you can't, embrace what is to come. For what is to come is everything you wanted and everything you feared.
More detailsContent Guidelines