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Out of Tune: The Original 2015 Draft

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*BEFORE READING* Note that this is the ORIGINAL/UNEDITED draft of my novel Out of Tune. This was written in 2015 and is in a VERY different style than how I currently write. I've reposted this draft due to requests from readers but please do not point out spelling/grammar issues or plot holes in this version as I will not EVER be editing this draft. 

For those who are opening this book for the first time and have not read the revised 2020 draft, I STRONGLY encourage you to read that version instead of this one (it is completed and can be found on my profile). Many of my novels have characters that overlap and appear in multiple books and that is the case for Out of Tune (new and old versions). Due to that, I want to point out that this draft of Out of Tune does NOT fit with my other newer books in terms of timeline or character depictions. It only overlaps with the 2015 OLD DRAFT of 'The It Boy' which has since been rewritten/completed in 2021 and released under a new title "A Side Effect of Celebrity"

For any questions or clarity regarding the above, please DM me or drop a comment in the opening chapter and I'll be happy to clarify.

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When her musician father unexpectedly dies, teenager Aileen Prince is forced to move across the country to live with her mother. Living with a step-family she feels like a stranger in is difficult but when she finds a rag-tag group of guys trying to start up a band, she knows that she can help take them to the next level.All Rights Reserved

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