In Too Deep
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Ever felt like you were something more?
Something magical?
Melody thinks she isn't anything special or anything important. She is just an my other ordinary girl...or so she thought.
One day, she finds herself in too deep.
Will she be able to get out and save the ocean or is she already so deep she can't be saved?
Read this fantasy and find out!!
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