You Stand Out From the Crowd [re-discontinued]

Hey! This is a tough thing to write.There will be competition and lots of different emotions (for the characters) and such. Why are you still reading me? I'm just an incompetent description written by an incompetent author :(

please only constructive criticism! this is my first story, which I have decided to re-discontinue. I will be adding on very slowly, maybe weeks in between chapters, along with edits to previous chapters along the way. I will say which edits I have made in the first chapter.