Once Upon His Last Day
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Last published Thu, Dec 17, 2020
What if you got the chance to relive a day when your deceased loved one was alive?
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Muriel lived a life just like any other 15- year old. She had quite a giggly and unique sense of humour. More than that, she always had an optimistic approach towards life and never stopped to find the bright side of everything. But one day, she hears the absolutely devastating news of her brother, Arthur's sudden death. Muriel did not have the chance to be by his side that day. He died alone amidst the muffled ambulance blares, without being surrounded by his loved ones . Drowning in the depths of despair, Muriel has given up on her optimism and is always in a grim mood, lost in her thoughts. However, a month later, she is inexplicably transported to her brother's last day alive. Now, Muriel is determined to do all the things she missed with her brother that day and realize that every second we are able spend with our loved ones is simply a treasure and just another gift given to us by God.
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