Into The Island

Hey guys! This is a draft for something I've been thinking of for a while. I might turn it into a comic as soon as I get a drawing tablet, but for now I'll post it here and read your reviews. This will be mainly a summary of the actual story, as I don't know if it would work as a book. the story is about an island in the coast of Brazil, known as the Snake Island (Google it, is a real place), and is set in a future where people found a way to get rid of the snakes, leaving the surviving ones as pets and a source of really powerful venom. Those people found a society, that was actually quite advanced, until a disaster in a factory killed lots of the population, and gave some of the survivors genetic mutations (cliché, I know). now the society is divided into three classes: the really powerful rich people (they tend to occupy positions of power, using the fear the rest of the population has as a weapon), the "common powered" people (normally the middle class) and the actually common people (the real poor people). The main characters are members of a revolutionary group, that plans to overthrow the government, the most important of them being Dr Jekill/Jordan, a genderfluid person that changes power as they change gender.