Shauna

THIS IS A RE-WRITE OF THE SAME BOOK WITH A CHANGE IN STORYTELLING PERSPECTIVE.
Please let me know which version reads better.
Shauna
I don't have time to look for love. I run four businesses with my siblings and if I'm not at one of the shops then I'm at home baking for the shops. I work seven days a week twelve hours a day.
I cook and clean and workout at JAGG, Just A Girl Gym, my ladies only workout spot. I am not likely to meet 'Mr. Right,' at any of these spots, and for now I am okay with that.
So why is it that when the new guest looks at me with his deep green/brown eyes, I want to melt in a puddle and cook and clean for only him (insert eye roll here for the stupid cliché I just fantasized about.")

Christoffer
I am not putting up with this shit! If my mother and sister want to be the leaders of their social set, let them marry Kourtney. Because I sure as hell won't.
I have a company to run and my own life to lead. Let me live my life and you live yours. I don't want that cookie cutter Barbie doll; I want something I can hold on to. I need a woman that has a good head on her shoulders and does something more than entertain more of the same empty-headed robots like herself.
Now I have to get away from all this craziness because they have stressed me the hell out. When I see her coming down the stairs all I want to do is grab her up, yank those stupid yellow gloves off, and whisk her away to a better life, I mean what the hell, anything is better than being a housekeeper, right?
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