Who did it?
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5 people are stuck in an elevator at a fancy hotel. In order to leave the elevator, they must find out who murdered them before this. In the past, someone had murdered all 4 of them the fifth person that was in the elevator with them is the murderer. If they do not find out who murdered them, they will never leave the elevator. A mysterious old man explains this to them. Who did it? who is the murderer? read more to find out! Book cover was created by @boekenworm100 💫
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