Ellanoir
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~~This is a short story that I had intended to publish along with other short stories but I decided that it deserved its own moment.~~ Areli Jade Cohen was broken by her sister's death. Ellanoir had always been there for her just as she had been there for Ellanoir. She had always been her sister's protector and companion. She and Ellanoir had been there for each other through thick and thin, through storms and sunshine. Everything feels wrong and off-kilter with Ellanoir gone. Areli hopes it's just a bad dream but Ellanoir's cold hand feels too real for it to just be a dream. ~Sneak Peek~ A loud, long beep sounded. It continued and nurses and doctors started rushing all around me in a frenzy. I tried to keep still and out of their way, my own face matching my sister's due to panic. I looked up at the monitor rearing the worst. The straight line on the monitor seemed to cement me in place. No. Nononononono. This can't be happening. She's too bright to die. She can't be taken away! Only 23 with a long, bright future ahead of her. My bright angel-like sister, with her strange knowledge of the future, couldn't be gone. I was praying to a god I had no knowledge of for her to come back. ~~ I welcome constructive criticism but please remember I'm a human with feelings as well.
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Killian

"I lost him, he's gone. If I'm not careful I will be too" -------------------------- He looks healthy now. His cheeks are rosy red, his lips aren't cracked. He looks good, he looks his age. But I still don't know why we're in the hospital. Alone, no, We're stuck in the room, his face pales. Like the day we got the news. No, wait what's happeing, His eyes, his body, his smile it all fades. I'm not ready, not yet. I just want to hold him one last time, give me one last chance to say goodbye. Just one more. "Sophia" Not now. I just need to say goodbye, let me say goodbye. "Sophia" I turn around, my hair is in my face, he's dissapeared, where is he. I frantically look around me. I'm in darkness. Empty, darkness. "Sophia" No, I had him. -------------------------- Killian Miller died four years ago. Leaving his sister Sophia Miller to grieve. What he hoped didn't happen, happened and now she has completely lost it. She isn't living anymore, but she's surviving. Each day harder then the other. August Stead comes into her life. Will he be able to help, will he be able to love again? -------------------------- Started: 27th July 2020 Completed: 12th October 2020 Editing completed: 27th December 2021

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