Kirti Kriti Aur Kartik Ki
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An mahabharata fanfic where there is time travel but.. With an unexpected twist.
Meet Kartikeya and Kriti. Two orphans who live with their grandmother, decent students living a carefree life and ardent devotees of Lord Shiva with an immense liking for the Mahabharat.
Their normal lives takes a turn when Mahadev himself comes to give them a mission - A mission that can change the whole story of how their favourite epic turns out... a something they'd been imagining themselves for years.
How will their entry affect the epic? What were they going to do when their life gets uprooted earlier than expected? And what will be the consequences of their interference? Find it out as you accompany our protagonists in this tale of love, friendship, betrayal, heartbreak, war and happiness.
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