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Entangled Hearts
Entangled Hearts Kim Taehyung, the cold and ruthless CEO of Kim Enterprises, rules his world with an iron will. But beneath the polished facade lies a heart shattered five years ago by the sudden departure of the only man he ever loved. Jeon Jungkook, once a vibrant and bubbly boy, now a powerful business magnate in his own right, returns to Seoul after a five-year absence that changed everything. Their families are powerful. Their businesses are at the top. Their past is a wound that never healed. As their paths cross once again, will the weight of five years be too much to bear, or will their entangled hearts find a way back to each other?
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Zanele Malinga is an accountant, who stays in sandton. When she returns home for a family lobola ceremony, a chance encounter with a man from another world threatens to unravel the careful balance she's built. Drawn into a relationship marked by intense passion and dangerous silences, Zanele begins to question what's real-and what's being hidden. As pressure mounts from all sides, the cracks beneath her polished life begin to show. Secrets surface, trust is tested, and the line between love and betrayal blurs. In a world where silence protects and truth destroys, how much can one woman carry- before everything comes undone? ⸻
TO BE LOVED AGAIN
Hazel once had a happy family a loving father and a caring mother until the day her father died she was only 6 her mom blames her and abuse her for her father's death now she's 18. What will happen when hazel meets Rhoda. Rhoda Ashley a 30 years old woman,the owner of young clothing industry one of the biggest and successful clothing industry in the city. People think she a heartless bitch but inside she's a big softy. How will this two meet and what will become of them read to find out.
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في عالمٍ لا مكان فيه للضعفاء، كانت ايلينا كارتر مجرد ظل لاسمٍ منسيّ، تعيش تحت جناح زوجة أبٍ لا تعرف من الرحمة سوى اسمها. وحين قررت تلك المرأة بيعها كما تُباع المتاع، لم تتخيل أن مصيرها سيرتبط باسم يُهمس به في الخفاء... ديميان بلاكويل. رجلٌ يُحكم إمبراطوريته من خلف ستائر العتمة، لا يُظهر ملامحه للعالم، ولا يبتسم إلا حين يسقط أحدهم تحت قدميه. زعيم مافيا لا يعرف الخسارة، ولا يعترف بالحب... حتى دخلت هي عالمه. أُجبرت على الزواج منه، وكان في عينيها وحشًا بثوب رجل. قاسٍ، متحكّم، لا يعترف بضعفٍ ولا يسمح بأقتراب أحد من قلبه الميت. لكنها لم تكن كأي امرأة... وكانت خطواتها الهادئة كافية لإشعال فوضى لم يعرفها من قبل. في صراع بين القسوة والعناد، تنشأ شرارة... تتحول إلى نار. هو رجل اعتاد السيطرة، وهي فتاة كُتب لها أن تُروّض المستحيل. فأي قلب سينكسر أولًا؟ وأيّهما سيجرؤ على الاعتراف أولًا... حين يصبح الكره هو الطريق الوحيد للحب ؟ ----- الروايه فيها مشاهد 18+ متبريه من ذنوبكم![လွဲတော်မူ [ Completed ]](https://img.wattpad.com/cover/405730197-256-k715773.jpg)
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