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Ongoing, First published Aug 17, 2020
An emotional poem. 

BRIEF SUMMARY OF THE POEM 

Many people have gone into utter distress thinking that they are not needed by anyone. That their thoughts and ideas are irrelevant. 
In the first Stanza, the poet describes the kind of suffering he went through, stating how he was discriminated and judged by other people. He also mentioned that he sits and reflects on his life in "Never ending tears of sorrow" the first Stanza focuses on how he was looked down on and how he also suffered. 

The second Stanza mainly talks about his future. " A day shall come". It tells us how great he shall grow and how all that was not in his favour will yearn for him. He explicitly tells how far he shall reach. Towards the ending of the Stanza, he starts to lament if he should forgive all who hurt him in the past and made him look irrelevant. 

The third Stanza answers the question asked in the second Stanza. He said that he shall forgive all who discriminated him and hold them dear to his heart. In this Stanza, the poet gave two reasons why he should forgive them 
1. Holding a grudge against anyone will end up affecting him. 
2. They played an important role in his life. 
The poem ends on a calm note when he says " I close my eyes and smile remembering my Opinion was not needed".
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