Valerie - Rewritten
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MatureOngoing24m
Last published Wed, Sep 23, 2020
Based off my original story: Finding Valerie
I've been wanting to rewrite this entire story for the longest time, and now nearly after three years, here is the new final version of my story!
Have you ever wonder what would happen if you pressed the restart button on your entire life? Valerie Castellano - only at seventeen years old - escaped from home, if you could call it that. Running away from her home life comes with a costly price, and it is her dark past following right behind her shadows.
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