Unfinished
- Reads 1,203
- Votes 114
- Parts 20
Complete Mon, Jan 25, 20161h 3m
Becca is an outsider, and so is Soren, which is how they became friends. He likes to watch her write and listen to her read her stories, but also just to watch her in general. That's how he comes to witness her death, and to receive a manuscript that she valued above her life, one that chronicles her life through the point of view of a guardian angel, with occasional comments from other points of view, including Becca's own. But just as the life of the author was cut off abruptly, the story remains unfinished.
A/N:
The story isn't going to be updated any time soon, I don't know if ever again. I may pick back up with it later and start posting things again, but I don't know.
A/N: I've labelled this as complete; I'm not going to be coming back to it. But I want it to be here, if only for posterity.
All Rights Reserved
#90
outsider
Join the largest storytelling communityGet personalized story recommendations, save your favourites to your library, and comment and vote to grow your community.
You may also like
The City in the sky
She's all alone. Her best friend abandoned her on a school night, leaving her vulnerable to the bullies who never miss a chance to break her spirit. Just when the isolation feels unbearable, a mysterious new girl steps in-offering kindness, strength, and maybe even friendship. But how long can hope really last? (Currently in beta,if you see any plot holes pls tell me,or mistake or a better discprition or a better anything that will be great thank you,English is not my first language Btw)Complete
The Line Drive
"'Bye.' I say after Edwin's kiss. He gives me a small smile that honestly looks more like a grimace. It makes me a little uncomfortable having him kiss me in the library. Edwin walks away, and someone standing in the corner of my vision makes me turn in my seat. A tall, muscular man is standing there, his arms crossed, staring at me. He's got dark brown hair, perfect eyebrows, and soft brown eyes. Honestly, he's gorgeous. And since I've read, and edited, about five articles about him, I recognize him immediately. Dane Sawyer. He's the best pitcher on our baseball team. He's hoping to go pro, although I'm not totally sure what the process is surrounding that, since I don't retain much of the information from the articles that I read about him. I know that he's also a junior, and that his girlfriend is hot as fuck. I've seen them together on campus. They're hard to miss because they are easily one of the most attractive couples that I've ever seen. I'm convinced that I must be hallucinating, because he makes eye contact and walks towards me. 'That was awkward.'" ~~~ Junior year is starting off chaotic for Mackenzie Brooks as she steps into her role as the editor-in-chief of the college's newspaper. She's smart, focused on school, the paper, and her TA responsibilities. Junior year should be starting off easy for Dane Sawyer. He's the star pitcher of the baseball team; attractive, athletic, desirable, with a hot girlfriend. Unfortunately, he's also failing computer science which is the one thing he sees that is in the way of his pro career. Different in more ways that one, when the two run into each other in the library, it's an immediate disaster. But when Dane convinces Mackenzie to be his tutor, both of their lives begin to change.Complete
Before She Even Knows
''There is only one thing crossing my mind right now. If he hates me so much, then why the hell is he kissing me back?'' ----------------------- Emma White has always been kind of a loner. Her mother died giving birth to her and her father never really cared, always working in his successful company. That's why she decides to go to a college away from home, something she's been dreaming of since she can remember. However, what happens when at her very first day on campus, she crosses path with Noah Allen? He is rich, popular, cold, rude and a player just to start with. No surprise she calls him Mr. Grumpy. What is driving her insane though is that he's only too cold when it comes to her. After some not so pleasant moments and lots of glares, she tells herself that the best is to stay away from him, but it won't be that easy. After a disastrous kiss and hidden jealousy, she finds herself deeply involved into what is this frustrating boy. Add to that the fact that he is her roommates' childhood best friend and you can see drama from miles away. Noah claims to hate her ever since they met, and he doesn't mean her first day of college. He remembers her just fine from a couple of years ago and all the feelings are back. He knows she doesn't remember him and he'll use this as his leverage to do what he has to do. It's what he promised his father and himself, even if it means he has to pretend to care for her. All he cares is his family business. At least it's what he tells himself, until the feelings start getting too mixed and he ends up thinking of her more than he should. Maybe it's not all about business after all. He knows their history started before she even knows, what he didn't expect was for her to be so different from what he has always believed.Complete
I Capital L Love You
"Maybe I'm just cursed into Loving you for eternity. That'd be pretty sweet only if you loved me, too." ~•~•~•~••~•~•~•~ Loving him was the best -- and worst -- form of self-destruction. Sophie has been friends with Oliver since they were seven and starry-eyed. And on some level, she has Loved him (with a capital L) ever since. She fell down that rabbit hole at an early age, and she still doesn't know how to climb out. So, she decided to start a journal to pinpoint where it all went wrong and to figure out where to go from there. ~•~•~•~••~•~•~•~ Started: March 8, 2021 Finished: April 2, 2021 Word Count: 18,000 **UPDATES MON/WED/FRI**Complete
Follow You (Second Chances Series Book 3)
***Complete***Book 3 in a series involving the same group of friends** Andrew Miller had a difficult upbringing and as a result his friends are his family. He worked hard to build a life for himself and wants nothing more than to find someone to share it with. He's been unlucky in love so far and just when he decides to stop trying to find the perfect woman in walks Abigail Anderson. Abigail is beautiful, talented, smart and funny. She too has a complicated past and prefers her independence and freedom. She travels all over the world and loves everything about her life. At least that's what she tells herself. One night together will forever change both of lives in ways they never could of imagined. They'll need each other to survive but will Andrew be able to convince Abigail that sharing your life with someone isn't all bad or will Abigail go back to her life of solitude? Will Abigail and Andrew get a second chance at happiness or is the pain too much to bare?Complete
Relationship Test
Snow have dreamed for a love that is everlasting with the right guy but has no apparent luck since she thinks something about her is loveless. She gets envious from gazing at couples who looked happy together and she wishes to find that great happiness. Casey wants love like many people and thinks he already has that. He has a girlfriend whom he loves a lot, but he didn't expect until later that she ends things between them and leaves him sulking. When Snow finds a devastated Casey, she realizes how much she knew nothing about him. Knowing nothing about relationships and love, the two express how intangible these two factors are. Then Snow makes a proposition: for one month, they're going to be together and learn the ins and outs of dating with the way of life. There are a couple of rules, but the most important one is that they can't fall for each other. On the last day of the month, that's when they end their relationship; which may possibly be the biggest challenge. ======= Finished: 10/10/21 #234 on #yaComplete
When Stories Wake Up
Are you a writer? Do you ever feel guilty... when your characters suffer? When you break them, just to make the story better? You say, "It's just fiction." But what if... it's not? What if your story started feeling the same way? What if the characters you shaped with your words began to remember everything, every heartbreak, every betrayal, every death you wrote for them? And what if they wanted more than just a chapter? So tell me... If the story becomes real... If the characters you once controlled begin to take the pen from your hands... If the story starts writing you... just the way you wrote them... With all the pain, the heartbreak, the twists you never saw coming... What do you think your ending will be?Complete
Where my Heart Lies
[*COMPLETE*] [*EPILOGUE, EXTRAS AND FILLER CHAPTERS MAYBE ADDED*] [NEEDS MAJOR EDITING AND A TONNE OF FILLER CHAPTERS] "You were burning with fever and I had the silliest idea. You were shivering, face all red, leaning closer and closer against me.. and in the heat of the moment, I did what I shouldn't have I kissed you, I loved you again." He whispered, and all she could do was look in his eyes, search them for the truth. For she knew, she had loved him too. ***** Ryan is haughty, at the almost end of his teenage. He had been a so called perfection throughout his school, and thus it was not strange for many girls to have a thing or two for him. One of them was Jessica, and mind you, he has never been interested. Jessica is 18. A freshmen in university. A complex brain with thoughts way deeper than what kids at her age are expected to have. She has quite a boring life- infested with diseases called #beingintrovert, #sociallyanxiety, and #ilovemycomfortZone. Liam hardly has a free hour at hand with his full packed schedule. But when he does get some time, he can be found flipping through the pages of psychological books in the library. It was at such a place when he gets acquainted with Jessica. Read this story to know how sweet romance mingles in their hearts, friendship blossoms and life gets some more meaning.Complete
She's all alone. Her best friend abandoned her on a school night, leaving her vulnerable to the bullies who never miss a chance to break her spirit. Just when the isolation feels unbearable, a mysterious new girl steps in-offering kindness, strength, and maybe even friendship. But how long can hope really last? (Currently in beta,if you see any plot holes pls tell me,or mistake or a better discprition or a better anything that will be great thank you,English is not my first language Btw)
More detailsContent Guidelines