What separates your neighbor from the people you see on TV is what they make, more about what they can do. That's what truly makes a person a person; not only their desire for success but the pain before it. Crawling to the top still leaves scars, however. This is my first published draft of a short story and I would like criticism and especially how to improve because I have A Few Paragraphs and A Dream. IG: marcusyvesjoseph P.S: I'm not even done with the first chapter yet.All Rights Reserved