A Few Paragraphs and A Dream
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Ongoing, First published Aug 24, 2020
What separates your neighbor from the people you see on TV is what they make, more about what they can do.  That's what truly makes a person a person; not only their desire for success but the pain before it. Crawling to the top still leaves scars, however.  This is my first published draft of a short story and I would like criticism and especially how to improve because I have A Few Paragraphs and A Dream.
IG: marcusyvesjoseph
P.S: I'm not even done with the first chapter yet.
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