
(A/N) Since I said I was on haiatus due to school, and I was re-organizing some stuff, I found this composition I worte on an English test from last year (February 2013) and thought "Hey, why don't I post this on Wattpad and see what others think about it?" And here it is. One thing I have to warn you about, is that I made some stupid mistakes. Like, Reaaaaaaaaaaaaally stupid. So... this is going to be separated in three parts: 1 - How I wrote it on my test; 2 - How it was after it was corrected; 3 - How I should have written it. I hope you guys enjoy it.All Rights Reserved