The undoing of consciousness
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Last published Sat, Oct 11, 2014
Gary is a 16 year old teenager , sociable , has his own group of friends and has decent grades. He has blue eyes , black hair and the average height for someone his age. His parents are not home a lot due to almost constant business trips , so he has anything a teen could wish for, popularity, good looks , no constant nagging from parents , and decent grades. But a twist will not take long to undo the near perfect existance he has.
But he wants more. A simple life like this is tedious and in his opinion , too cliché. But one should be always careful for what he wishes for as his own wish can turn against himself.
This story will be based around the writings of his diary , he will write about his surroundings , relations with people , memories and everything else that catches his attention or that seems relevant enough for him.
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