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Final Comprehension

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Cassie Evans has never known anything else than being a detective with the Chicago Police Department. 

Then, one year ago, her former mentor and partner kidnapped and kept her in a dark cellar, turning her life a living hell by using his twisted mind to torture her with many kinds of different tools. Only by a miracle and her sheer strength of will, Cassie managed to escape, taking revenge on her captor in doing so before being rescued by the Police Force. 

Now Cassie's life is in shambles, being under close scrutiny not only by her commanding officer, but also her trusted psychologist Enzo, who both strongly encourage her to put down her career on  the force and start a desk jon with in the department. 

Then a tiny piece of paper turns Cassie's life upside down once again, leaving her to not only doubt her commanding officer's, but also her own sane frame of mind.

Will Cassie be able to leave the past behind and finally move on? Or has her worst fear become reality and her ordeal will start all over again? 

One thing is for sure - her life will never be the same again.All Rights Reserved

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Saving Alyssa by AnikaQ

No one sees her. No one knows her. Alyssa Williams is the girl who fades into the background, the one who slips through the hallways unnoticed. She wears her black hoodie like a shield, her face hidden in the shadows, always on the edge of the crowd. She doesn't want to be seen. She doesn't want to be known. Because if anyone were to truly look, they'd see the fear in her eyes, the bruises that don't heal, and the story she's terrified of telling. Her life is a quiet war she fights every day-against her father's fists, against the memories that threaten to consume her, and against the world that's turned its back on her. She's learned to survive in the silence, to hide from the chaos that swirls around her. But when she decides she's had enough, and tries to run away from the nightmare that is her home, she finds herself crashing headfirst into something-or rather, someone-who might be even more dangerous than what she's running from. Dylan Scott. The bad boy. The bully. The one everyone stays away from. His presence is a storm, and his reputation is as dark as the night. He has a group of friends who don't question his actions, a life filled with secrets, and a world where no one dares to get too close. Everyone warns Alyssa about him, but she's already seen the worst the world has to offer. So when their paths collide, she's not sure what to expect. Will Dylan help her escape the hellhole she calls home-or will he drag her back into it? The truth is, Dylan Scott is hiding as much as Alyssa. He's trapped in his own battle, with his own demons, and just like her, he's been running from something for far too long. But when his and Alyssa's lives intersect, everything begins to unravel. The walls they've built around themselves begin to crack, and neither of them can ignore the pull between them. The question is: will they be able to save each other, or will they destroy each other in the process?

Together Forever by SanC-Rylie

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LOVING FIERCELY by notyour_ordinarypoet

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