THE VISIT
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MatureComplete Fri, Sep 4, 20208m
(T/W- mention of death and suicide)
(In which Emma Burton has an unlikely guest, and she tries to be a polite host, but really, she would rather be dead).
Emma Burton, someone who can see- and help out, if she's feeling perky- spirits, doesn't understand why she can't see her recently deceased friends. And Death is not helping by paying her a visit, and being rather preachy.
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