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¡Hola mundo!
En este apartado iré poco a poco haciendo críticas de historias que he leído en wattpad, y tal vez, otras fuera de la plataforma como algunos clásicos y etc.
Esta cuenta es personal, no es una editorial.
Pueden escribirme al privado si quieren una crítica que les ayude a seguir creciendo, o si simplemente saben lo que vale su obra, pero quieren una segunda impresión con ojos imparciales.
Mis gustos son muy diversos, leo de todo un poco.
Solo, si me pides una crítica te pediré paciencia, y más si tu historia es larga.
También tengo vida fuera de wattpad, así que por eso la demora.
Estoy iniciando con esto, así que veremos que pasa.
Saludos y cariños para todos lo que lleguen hasta aquí.
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