Tushka Tornado in My Point of View

This story I had to write for one of my classes and it is my first draft, and j wanted to see what anyone else thinks about it so I decided to type it out here.
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Introduction/Summary:
April 14th, 2011 was the day my town got destroyed by a tornado, and forever changed my cuter...in a good way. This story is my point of view and of course in first person view.
Again this is a first drafts so there may be some errors. Also if you went through it and reading this and you think there is some false statements, this is my point of view and of what I remembered. This is like a short story and nonfiction at the same time. Please if you like it, notify me!
This is my first story created on this app.
This is only one part!!!