Hold your breath (on going)
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  • Reads 47
  • Votes 11
  • Parts 3
  • Time 28m
Ongoing, First published Sep 08, 2020
16 year old Amelia lives with her loving parents and her older brother in California in a small town called Amsterield.

Going to Amsterield south high school.. everyone is whispering and gossiping about the most amazing day of the entire year the dreaded school trip. Which is coming to a near right now.

She returns from summer holiday to find out that the guy she likes Brett Williams is now with the typical high school bully - Jennifer.
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 Brett Williams is the typical high school bad boy good personality.. handsome, great in his studies and has the most charming and attractive smile, no one can resist.

Traveling was never an option for her, with the school trip coming ahead will she take the risk to go and enjoy or not?

The day she dreaded the most has come everything's going perfect until there's a disturbance in their trip screams are filling the cold air, everyone's terrified, what going on?  
What happens when a masked group comes and our keen on killing everyone?

Hold your breath and follow along the journey of Amelia and Brett.. 

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