Study Time, Spring Time

It was morning during the oh so beautiful season that we call Spring., and 5 friends are having fun whilst studying for their exams. Nothing can go wrong, right?

This was a story I had to write for an English exercise. It features five girls with a certain character type; -
The Emo: Shantall Shinobu.
-The Clown: Syr Formaggio.
-The Nice One: Sarah Astolfo.
-The Quiet Shy One: Harumi Shinobu.
-The Cute Innocent One: Sakura Joestar.
I hope it was made obvious enough in my story. Due to English being my second* language, I'd appreciate if anyone somehow finds this 771 word story, and even finishes reading it, that they'd tell me if I made any grammar mistakes.