Murderer

This is an attempt on a Mystery/Crime one-shot.
It's my first time writing about something I really like and, posting it in hopes for someone else to like it.
English isn't my first language,so if you notice any inconsistency or grammar mistake please let me know.I'll accept constructive criticism but, please abstain yourself from any mean comments.
If you want to translate or do an adaptation;please contact me first.

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