The Neophytes
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Ongoing1h 34m
Last published Fri, May 13, 2022
A mysterious criminal thriller!
Six teenagers set out on a grave adventure better call it a mission which can definitely cost them their lives!
Little did they know they were messing with the wrong people and that nothing else but their own lives would be at stake!
Choice was theirs and they made it; barely aware of what would be the consequences.
They were naive, untrained but had the potential to do the impossible!
Come and take insights of this thrilling saga based on six teenagers from the top university of the city....
Witness them become what they never dreamt they'd ever become.....
From a commoner to the NEOPHYTES!
They are the chosen ones......but the question is who chose them? And for what cause? Why only them?? What's the deal to be sorted??
Everything will be revealed. Everything will be unleashed. No stone will be left unturned but this will require efforts.....the only problem is they'll be their lives' most risky ones!
Cover credit to my very talented and dear friend @_miss_idealist_
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