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How I would rewrite Mulan 2020

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Parts 5
Time 25m

goldfish-ninetysix

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Just watched Mulan with my family and it was.... ok? 
The action scenes were good but there were some parts that could be written better, especially towards the end of the film where it felt like they ran out of budget and just made everything a little too convenient and quick to end.

So here's my version of parts of the movie that I feel could be improved :)All Rights Reserved

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