You Crept Into My Heart [Rewritten Version Continuation]
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Ongoing, First published Sep 13, 2020
From the time we were tiny girls we always dream of marrying this perfect guy. We all construct an image of the guy that will be ours forever. Either tall, handsome, short,muscular,smart or thin.

But what if that perfect guy doesn't exist or if they do meet all your "classifications" then they don't know you exist. 

What happens if a guy takes an interest in you and comes to ask for your hand in marriage but you have absolutely no clue who he is?

What if your father accepts the marriage proposal on your behalf without even asking your permission?

What would you do?

Well, this is exactly what happens to Afia Patel, a young 21 year old varsity student who is patiently waiting for her prince charming to come sweep her off her feet.

She always dreamt of the day she will meet her one and only. She'll just know he's the one! She'll have that gut feeling. But what if she doesn't get that gut feeling and she is left up to decide for herself. 

Now meet Ubaidullah Khan. A fun loving person always dreamed of having a wife who was loyal and obeyed him, who was beautiful but did not need any help from makeup to make her pretty , who was outspoken but modest. What happens when he finds that in Afia. The girl he admired from afar. The girl who doesn't have any clue he exist. The girl who stole his heart with just one unintentional  glance his way. The girl who crept into his heart without even knowing. 

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Hey guys!! This is the continuation of my book that was on my original account (Butterscotch_07) which is currently inactive. please read from here from now onwards. Thank you all so much!!

If you want to read the original book that I wrote(highly advise you not too its crap) go see my other account butterscotch_07

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© All Copyright reserved to the writer, @PoohBear8435 only. Please do not copy, distribute or publish any of my work in any form. .... ... She sat looking at the big mirror blushing and thinking about her groom, she didn't even know his name. She eagerly waited for him to come and take her with him to his home, to their home. She was thinking what he would say, what his voice sounded like, what he would call her and how would she react to his actions. The things which she had never imagined in her life about marriage, home, romance, relationship etc., she was thinking about it all today. She hears the door open and she closes her eyes, her head bowed down, cheeks blushed while her chest heaved up and down due to heavy breathing. She hears a voice talking to her from a bit far. She had her back to him. "Hi, Thanks a lot. If you hadn't come, then I would have been on the streets. You really did a good job. The director was impressed with your improvisation though the role was small." She was confused, what is her groom speaking about. She opens her eyes and turns around to see him. Her face falls, it was not her husband. He hands an envelope to her and thanks her before he leaves. She takes the envelope still confused. She thinks - Oh! This must be a wedding gift from his friend. But what was he speaking about, I couldn't understand anything ... Marriage was not on her list but when it happened, it happened in a strange way. Read the book to understand how is this a strange marriage and how would this ever work. *Fictional story Was listed at #1 under SidNaaz on 21st Jan, 2021.. happiest day!! Started:. 21/12/2020 Completed:. 12/03/2021