The Queens Quest
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so I'm rewriting this, I originally wrote this in 7th grade so don't judge. It explores the life of Queen Clair and her quest to save her kingdom and come into her own as a young, headstrong queen...and hopefully her dying mom and freinds whose life is in her young hands. Queer characters, a lil magic, prophecies, and manipulative parental scars, yk fun stuff like that...Shh ik there's inconsistencies, this is a rough draft.
Little excerpt: "and...I know what you're going to do." When I didn't answer right away he cocked his head at me. "Am I wrong?"
"You can't stop me."
"I wasn't going to...I just." He sighed. "You don't even know where it is, or if it will work. I don't think that this is the answer."
"Daneen..." I leaned down and cupped his face. "I have to try. This flower is the only hope we have."
"Then let someone else go, this isn't your job."
"It is my job. I am here to protect my people. How long do I let men and women die in this war? Do I let my mom die? How long do I let Ursula reign before she destroys us? I have to do this."
Daneen got up from the bed. He stood a few inches taller than me, even with the heels I wore. He placed his hands on my shoulders.
"I just..i just want you to be careful," he finally said.
I removed his hands off my shoulders.
"I need to do this," I said.
Ignore the inconsistencies and character personality changes...i actually think if you read it with an open mind its fine.....slow updates
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